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There once was an earthen boy
Whom I’ve had the misfortune of loving
With coarse little hands
And long springy limbs
It already reads like a tragedy


On rubble we kissed
Covered in soot
Notes of muffled anguish
Eerily in the background
Were disregarded


We leapt forth into the shadows
Fingers intertwined
We swam in great lakes
Picked thorns out of each other’s wounds
Slept in a tangled cocoon
Under the moonlight


Spring fell short and droughts burned our skin
Breasts against his back I was the shelter
He crawled inside and hid


Plagued by whispers
Stirred out of sleep
At nights we went searching
For home was no longer safe
Barren and cold
I stretched my bruised arms
Fingers skimming that emptiness
Only to be answered with silence


Sometimes I wish we both could drown
Share a grave covered in leaves
Bask in an orchestra of grief and choked tears
So my cries will have a name and a body
I can lament how far I fell


Where are you?
We cried when one hand lost the other
Until the fateful day where there was no reply


There once was an earthen boy
Whom I’ve had the misfortune of loving
When it all came to pass our brims were too full
I wanted more and he shattered
Morning
Time to squeeze into the old meat suit
Time to match
Shoes to bag  to skirt to depression
And breathe in
Ideals and goals
A foreign concept known as productivity

Tongue  limp behind a wall of crooked teeth
Be sure to keep all fingers clock punching ready
Time to march dutifully out the door
While paying attention the staccato of your steps aligns with your sighs and heartbeats and traffic

Good morning
Don’t forget to be a willing participant

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Tsofit
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I am an indefinite student with a writing problem. I tend to get sidetracked easily. Sometimes I work for cabbages and potatoes.
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I decided to finally clean up my gallery from pieces I feel no longer represent my writing...
Here goes nothing.
  • Mood: Lazy
  • Listening to: Between the Buried and Me
  • Reading: 11/22/63-Stephen King
  • Watching: South Park
  • Eating: air
  • Drinking: coffee

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pazlowq Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015   Traditional Artist
Happy Birthday!
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Thank you! :)
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!~
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nawkaman Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
Thank you muchlykindly for the fave! :heart:
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You're welcome! :hug:
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BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hello there.  Thank you for faving React and We.  Tis much appreciated.
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You're most welcome . :)
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Thanks:)
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